I'm kind of embarrassed this is taking me a while
🕑 Added 2020-11-15 10:06:48 +0000 UTCOkay folks,
I'm working on Delvers 5. I have like 4 chapters in various states of completion. One thing that is slowing me down and I hadn't thought about is the amount of world building I'm having to do.
You'll see when you read even the first chapter.
So speaking of which, I'll give you the first line of the first chapter:
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*One day before the events at the end of Delvers LLC 4, Golden Handcuffs*
Comments
J B
someone's gonna knock the smirk off his face for once?
Blaise Corvin
It's a Dolos Chapter. I think you guys are gonna like it.
Cameron C
Hm. I don’t know that I would start with a flashback. But I would have to read the chapters a bit more Edit: I would start with Bezzi!
Paul Robinson
Eh with a beard you could have a passable resemblance
Blaise Corvin
I'm gonna have everyone eating a picnic and exchanging puns for 150k words.
Kurt A
World building sounds nice, but only as long as the plot actually moves forward somewhat.