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Delvers LLC 5, ch 1

🕑 Added 2020-11-17 02:56:47 +0000 UTC

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Blaise Corvin

Nice catch

WyrdWizard

During her report to Dolos Amazon called Henry Henry Booth not Henry Sato.

Blaise Corvin

Mo'hali. Nice catch. Fixing it now

William Waggoner

Just a question. During the part where “Riggs” is mentioned it says something along the lines of he “got himself adopted as Fideli similar to Henry and Jason.” Is that supposed to be “Fideli” or “Mohali”?

Kitsone

World Building *gasm*

Blaise Corvin

There will be a lot of clues about that in this book. I think everyone will dig it.

Drew Risch

I kind of want to see Apate’s planet... is it anything like Ludus?

Brandon Pio

Might be a combination of reading Aether's Revival series, and a bunch of other cultivator books that point out that, once they reach a certain level they are as gods among the mortals, transcending all limits normal reality holds them to, as well as enemies of the heavenly realms

J B

Hadn't thought of cultivators - more along the lines of displacer beasts or hounds of tindalos were what came to mind for me.

Brandon Pio

Other than a few typos this was awesome. Especially the Aetherkin = Enemy tidbit. Now I cant help but think that the Cultivators are the enemy XD


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