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Delvers LLC 5, ch 3

🕑 Added 2020-12-19 12:11:28 +0000 UTC

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Blaise Corvin

Definitely! I have been super excited about writing this book for a while because it's really going to introduce the larger universe's lore in a major way

Ishaar

Good chapter. It's nice to see the universe expanding from the reader's point of view, and now it looks like Bezzi-ibbi will be able to rival or surpass his brothers. Also really curious about the devas, so hope you find some way to show us what they are.

Blaise Corvin

That's a good question. There's an answer for it. I was going to introduce the concept of angel morality later on, but maybe I should include something in this chapter, too.

Drew Risch

Why does he just tell his teacher that the lion guy is a bad dude? I don’t think the angels want to be training the enemy...? Edit: but fun chapter all around tho!

Kevin McKinney

hmmm ... interesting development; I like it

Blaise Corvin

Thanks! This worked out exactly as I'd intended it...I think.

Daniel Sifrit

Nice way to expand the cosmology in a different direction and aspect.


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