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Jake's Story, ch 16

🕑 Added 2021-02-04 14:26:09 +0000 UTC

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Kevin McKinney

Good story! Noticed a typo: the effect on hsi body could

Gregory Cunningham

Count me as a fan on this story. Very much looking forward to full story.

Blaise Corvin

yeah I kept going back and forth on it while messaging. I decided that them being on drugs gave me a little bit of creative license

SteveKeiler

Keep it up Blaise! I do think some of the dialog from the bad guys felt a little forced, like something I can't imagine anyone ever saying during a fight. Just my $0.02, though.

Blaise Corvin

lol thank you

Kedoco Coontz

I gotta say. I really wish i hadnt started reading this before it was finished.... because now i have ANOTHER book i like, but have to wait for each chapter. Damn it Blaise, start writing some shit books i can ignore.


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