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Delvers LLC 5, chapter 4

🕑 Added 2021-02-25 17:38:24 +0000 UTC

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Gregory Doreza

Love this chapter and how Jason goes from detective to lord to hulk smash. Enjoying how Nora has integrated with Delvers LLC

Drew Risch

Holy shit! What a chapter! So good!

J B

Plus the blast of the pods landing will help in a swarm scenario!

Blaise Corvin

All fixed! Thank you

SteveKeiler

I can see why that chapter was tough, but you nailed it. Did notice one detail and a few typos: Early on, you talk about Uluula's new armor. Was that something that was mentioned in Golden Handcuffs? I can't remember. If not, maybe some details would be in order. Nex, Jason went - Next despite complainin the most about - complaining amount of money. He turned to Calista - Missing close quotes next to tTyron shouted - Tyron Rapist should all be killed - Rapists

Kedoco Coontz

ODSG- Orbital Drop Shock Goblins. Hell, being able to launch the triplets down with a full gear loadout would be disgustingly OP. Theyre already pretty tanky, so they dont even need much in the way of parachute/decent

Blaise Corvin

Great minds think alike. :) Remember Henry was working on something for the goblins. They can't fly, so they might need a way to get to the ground, right?

Kedoco Coontz

This made me thing of something the Hull needs/would probably have. Since they have comms to/from the ship to ground, and sometimes tye ground guys need equipment from the ship, and the ship already has like 27493 other types of guns/cannons; why wouldnt it have "drop pods" to load a stack of whatever is needed, and launch it straight to the recipient. So when Henry inevitably loses his ammo bandolier, they can just hot shot a fresh set of slugs to him. And get him back behind a gun. Or medical supplies. Or a spare gun, sword, etc for anyone who needs it. Hell, even being able to launch a mess kit/miramite of chow for an extended time on ground. Possibilities are endless.

Kevin McKinney

Yeah. This was good.

J B

Love it. The way each character's inner perceptions of the rest of Delvers keeps ratchetting up further into the 'oh my GOD!' levels, and driving them along? Well, well done. Dunning Krueger done right.


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