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Delvers LLC 5, ch 5

🕑 Added 2021-03-02 03:53:50 +0000 UTC

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Drew Risch

This was a good ass chapter. It’s those moments we get to see of everyday Ludus that I feel like really flesh out the universe and make it feel real and big. Nice work.

SteveKeiler

Glad to see you're back in the swing of things! I didn't really get where the gangly bit came from. Henry says he looks derpy, then Uluula says he's not "gagly" which eventually turns into gangly. Two other typos: "I attached her." - Attacked "you aren’t the major for no reason" - mayor


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