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Delvers LLC 5, ch 6

🕑 Added 2021-03-11 14:49:23 +0000 UTC

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Gregory Doreza

The audiobook for this book is going to rock!

Blaise Corvin

:) And that was in the present. A lot of stuff in this chapter will be ironed out and clarified in the next one]

Drew Risch

That was amazing. Wait, was the chapter where the foreign royalty escaped at the beginning of this book (or was it the end of the last one) in the past? Or was that a different princess? Also, damn Aohd, that kick orb is working REALLY HARD to alter the past for you, lol. Like, squirrels on meth type energy 😂

Drew Risch

Holy shit.

Michael Bianski

Love the deeper character diving and world building. Great chapter. One small grammar edit if you want those: “The youngest princesses of the Kilish royal family actually braved the ocean to escape to this continent.  Of course, she wasn’t given much of a choice.” Based on the second sentence saying “she” and the rest of the paragraph only talking about one person, seems it should be “princess” and not “princesses”.

Gabe Canada

Solid chapter!

Gregory Cunningham

Great chapter!!

J B

I am greatly enjoying this - thanks! Love learning more about the O'Breen clan, and strongly suspect there's rather a lot more there to be discovered!


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