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Delvers LLC 5, ch 7

🕑 Added 2021-03-30 18:12:55 +0000 UTC

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ruben flores

Couple of grammar errors. Relationshiop and you said one one

Blaise Corvin

Woops! Thanks for the catch!

Drew Risch

You called the class of ship they are on the “Firebolt” at one point, and then later refer to it as a “Sparrow” class when talking about it not being able to “fit a rotting army,” just a heads up :)

Gregory Doreza

You pegged Filipinos correctly! I will never forget my mom giving directions that way at night.


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