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Asgard Awakening 2, ch 15

🕑 Added 2020-05-23 07:46:08 +0000 UTC

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Blaise Corvin

fixed!

Tanner Lovelace

“recogmotopm”?!? I assume that’s a typo?

Blaise Corvin

In the first version I wrote of this chapter she had, but I decided there was too much going on. It made it harder to read, and also, Bravoosa was kind of confused and overwhelmed. I put myself in her head and realized she wouldn't be challenging a superior, especially in front of the Guide.

Dennis Erwin

That was really good.

J B

Loved it. I had figured Trav would be fighting to help get the royal slot for Yaakova's sister. I figured he'd have to shove his position( & therefore potential) in their faces, given Yaakova's actions. Hadn't forseen the spy, but not too surprised. I would have thought the captain would have squawked more when the old harridan had wanted her troops new weapons, tho.

Blaise Corvin

No worries! I'm happy for the feedback and glad I didn't screw that one thing up at least. :)

Timithy klesick

I retract my statment i could of sworn it wasnt there but its also way past my bed time. I apologize

Blaise Corvin

Thanks! And are you sure? To his side, Yaakova said softly, but loud enough to be heard around the room, “Her name is Ursha, Master. She is one of my sister’s ministers, an elder of the Mist family.”

Timithy klesick

Very nice and thank you for writing even through you bee sting. They make a big fuss about yaakova calling him master but you didnt put her calling him master in the conversation. Sorry bugged me a little.


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