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Past Life Hero, Chapter 26

🕑 Added 2023-08-12 03:20:12 +0000 UTC

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Tikiza

I cant wait for his first contract ^^

Stephen Pearson

The more I think about it, the more this bugs me, so hopefully this is useful feedback and doesn't come off as mean or aggressive; feel free to ignore me if it's not helpful. He's behaving 'dumb', maybe to artificially drive plot, idk, but it seems out of character? First, the dagger. Knowing it's enchanted triggers him researching enchantments; yet at no point does he seem to ever ask a professor what it is or how to get it reliably appraised. Nor does he ask his new acquaintance, seemingly accepting the highly dubious claim that it's minimally enchanted, and thinking he will sell it without even really knowing what it does. Why is this dubious? The prince has lackeys. Prince is acknowledgement of a family's temporal power, presumably on a single world. So, they are from the same world, and had the same training to ensure the same path, aka lifers. Therefore he has ways of gaining value not available to others, plus his lackeys funneling into him, not counting potentially corrupt professors. And he is too arrogant to accept basic stuff if he can do better. That's first.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)


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