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Jake's Story, ch 21

🕑 Added 2021-07-03 05:40:23 +0000 UTC

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Kevin McKinney

Good chapter, I like it! Good plot development! In his first life, people had even actually tried to protest current events, claiming the government was responsible. Monsters had eaten most of them.  Great line!!

Blaise Corvin

Why did the can-do sentence throw you out of the story?

Delta

“Groups of can-do people often formed groups.” This sentence kinda threw me out of the story. Also, I saw an instance of “Warlords” instead of “Wardogs”. Thanks for the chapter.


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