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Jake's Story, ch 27

🕑 Added 2021-07-27 06:31:08 +0000 UTC

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Blaise Corvin

Okay the update is live :)

Blaise Corvin

This is a good suggestion. I want to see what Thaabit says

J B

Perhaps the first wave in this chapter could be something like, "Jake built a Demonic Contradiction Wave, based on a dirty old penny from his pocket and a bottle of bleach from his ring - both cleanliness and solid/liquid contradictions might make it more potent." or something? Could help explain why he's such a packrat, too!

Blaise Corvin

Thanks for the comment. I will try to explain. I'm assuming that you don't read a lot of Xianxia or Wuxia. This short-hand is kind of an homage to the genres I drew from for this story. It's common in Chinese fantasy stories to just skim right over this sort of stuff. It's not my usual style and it takes some work to remember to let things go while I write it, but it's been a lot of fun so far.

Thaabit Rivertree

Good chapter, but I'm having trouble understanding the demonic contradiction wave. It just seems weird - what is it made of, how is he doing it, how is he getting different types of energy from different things and how do they affect it. I remember a basic explanation but it just doesn't make sense to me. What exactly is the energy he keeps taking from mundane objects? Also, I think a shorter name might help since it's said so often. Just a suggestion

Blaise Corvin

Perhaps I can add a line to clarify, but he was using different types of energy in the hopes of getting a bigger, nastier reaction

The Lost Pages

Great chapter. One thing has me confused. How does the Demonic Contradiction wave work? I thought it took 2 elements to clash in an explosion. Was there more to it than that? He kept pulling multiple elements beyond what seemed normal for the double.

J B

Demonic gynospinx? An.... interesting imagination! :D Just a damn shame I can't get into a RPG you run...

Rick White

Thanks for the chapters


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