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Sponsored Apocalypse ch 10

🕑 Added 2023-02-10 09:50:25 +0000 UTC

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Blaise Corvin

No worries! It means I was doing it right!

HenryMorgan

Cheers for that, i jumped the gun

Blaise Corvin

Thanks for the comment. A lot of this actually comes up in the next chapter, so you're right on the mark. Just needs a little more time to cook, here.

HenryMorgan

Hey, enjoyed the chapter. One quibble, even before it was explained, it was immediately obvious that the man was using the woman as bait, the key givaway being the man behind, the woman in front of the fence. The MC is fairly intelligent and is genre savvy, it should be one of the scenarios he considers. It would be in charactor for him to dither over what is happening and what to do, and also IC for him to be shocked at the decisiviness of Aldina's execution (it would be IC for him to say we need to think what to do), but it is OoC for him to be blindsided. Also, he should have protested a little bit more at the execution, for all they knew, the man was insane but trying to keep the zomies away from the handcuffed woman and maybe the man who handcuffed her was dead next to her.


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