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Inheritance OT Fallen, ch 6

🕑 Added 2024-12-22 04:30:05 +0000 UTC

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Ethan King

I love this new title. It should be written as such. Write it with the "dense anime protagonist." Becoming a real boy. Lol

Blaise Corvin

Lucky for you, I've already almost got 2 books written. lol. I just need to edit and post the chapters. Probably in another week or two I'll get a bunch more up.

Pasquale Mcdaniel

I love this concept.

Richard Riley

I think DPD needs more fleshing out of the start (see comments under DPDch4). IotF I mostly have issues with the fact that he begged for years to get one year to get stronger, and it only took a long weekend to succeed. Seems anticlimactic - but despite that I think IotF has a more compelling story.

Tetsu-nii

I could see where her death could be great grist for the MC's progression, but yeah it would be a "feel BAD" moment. Making it a great spur to his motivation. There might be some haters, but a good kick in the MC's ass.

Robert Rosenthal

Both have potential but so far I prefer this one.

Jiří Mocek

Both stories are good, If possible, I would like to read both. But if I had to pick one, I'd stick with this one.

b bor

I’m intrigued…. Wanna read more

Matthew Montevideo

Both? I am intrigued by both stories. Both reborn into magic worlds but way different mind sets (so far) and circumstances. I would read both. So I hope for bot, not that you don’t have a ton of other projects.

Blaise Corvin

That's kind of what I was thinking. The first female dead died at the end of chapter 4 in Dual Power Destiny, too, and I think it would be feelsbad for a lot of people.

Tetsu-nii

I see a lot of potential for development with this story. I'd also like to know how Dual Power Destiny would play out. But if I had to pick one, I'd stick with this one, personally.

Wandakin

Really enjoying the story so far. Have not read Duel power density, so by default this is my favorite 😀


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