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Past Life Hero 3, ch 36

🕑 Added 2025-01-25 11:58:09 +0000 UTC

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Blaise Corvin

I thought about the sniffing, but in a culture where people have such an acute sense of smell, it also makes sense that publicly sniffing would be like the opinion of humans copping a feel and would be fairly sexual.

Richard Riley

I liked Adam's sniff-and-snuggle suggestion.

Aaron Guhin

Seems like a kissing moment.

Adam

Just started book 1 Audio, and bought pre-ordered other two. I don't know how you find the time, but then I realize you post stuff in middle of the night. For the momo question, I'd have to read their interactions before again but I imagine the emotion she feels (time apart, unknown, last of her kind with impending annihilation) would make her want to show affection. Even if kissing his neck while snuggled in. She also use to sniff him so you could turn it funny/endearing like embrace, sniff, bury her head in his neck with relief. Dictation would definitely pose some challenges but hope your total time is reduced with dictation and then find/replace typos... Couple I found: - Then the man swuished his cape - Max ignored the spider god. He knew for <"from"> experience now that Anansi - Then Max gave Saliron partial control of his mana as ran through... - The connection with the resonance Max had found was served <"severed">, and the ominous, harmful energy was instantly cut off. Fore <"For"> a few seconds

NovaZero

Celeron is here to serve! Auto-bones, roll out!

Blaise Corvin

Sorry for the typos. I think I have the egregious ones fixed now. This story is one that I entirely write with dictation, so the problems are different than with stories I write in other ways. It's kind of interesting, if a little maddening.

Blaise Corvin

I think the hug is more realistic, but the kiss is more on the nose and will be more helpful to more readers to understand the subtext. I'm still not sure.

A Bliss

What do I gotta to get some respect around here!? You need to add another do after gotta. I think no kiss. It has been a while for her and like you said she is going through a lot of emotions at that moment.

kik

I think it depends on how long it has been for her. What type of stuff their speices does. Lastly what you want to convey with their reunion. If you want a kiss in there or just a hard hug.

Dungeonborn

Tftc! R.I.P. Gantry. But on the other hand I’m glad to see Momo again. And lastly Saliron has been called Celeron again in this chapter …

Petr Pavelka

Celeron should be Saliron instead?

James Breaux

Whooo tftc


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