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Past Life Hero 3, ch 13

🕑 Added 2024-04-21 19:18:31 +0000 UTC

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Disparate Sen

“Yes. That true. It’s only a matter of time until they track me down.” -->That's "I would like for you to only contract with spirit I think are worthy if you are my contractor." -> spirit(s)... and do you mean the spirits are worthy, or that summoner is worthy OF? "Then I’ll never get another contract” --> period He mentally called out to his spirit, Are you all there? -->spirit(s) ? btw, I don't mean anything when I point out stuff like this. You use voice typing software of some kind, right? I do too and I always have so many typos to fix afterwards. Not good at social stuff but this is me saying I love your writing. :)

Blaise Corvin

Good callout. I forgot to add something

Tray D

Anansi should have already known he was a Champion. Swan mentioned she would be rewarded for killing Max because he was a champion in Book 2 Chapter 57 and Anansi said he saw the whole thing in Chapter 59.


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