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Past Life Hero 3, ch 19

🕑 Added 2024-05-20 03:26:12 +0000 UTC

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Disparate Sen

"people were still being greedy and shortsights" (shortsighted) "Even in the fact of looming global annihilation" fact->face "Portal bread were basically how all the invading monsters were getting reinforcements" ->break, not bread? "The only reason humanity hadn't been wiped out was because of human weapons effective on some monsters, Challengers, Returners..." confusing ? "Returners from monster-controlled areas came back to hearth" ->Earth? I feel so bad for Chad but also so happy he's held on so long! and I can't wait to see what Daliko will be like!

Blaise Corvin

dammit. lol. Unfortunate byproduct of working on several stories at once :P

Petr Pavelka

“Something else that Kevin had been studying” - I think you meant Max :)


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