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EP 1 - page 2
🕑 Added 2018-04-29 16:33:33 +0000 UTC Project: Keep calm and drink coffee, The Evil Within 2 fanbook---------------------------------
This page takes a bit long to make, I re-planned the panels 3 times but the composition and character look somehow very stiff. Funny enough so far I still feel one of my two years ago project (Possessors) are looking better - or at least, more fluid and dynamic - than what I'm doing right now. Even though the lines are quite messy.
After finishing this page, I'm attempting to spend more time on figuring out how to plan the panels (actually I already made 2 versions but they are not thought well enough) and focusing more on the compositions and fluidity. So the lines may be a bit messy because there won't be enough time for inking. I'm not sure if the next pages will be like from totally different project *sweat*
And oh have I mentioned, this fanbook is just a parody book full of stupid jokes. (like Flammable Tendency) Why am I so serious about it right now xD
Here's the rough sketch and one of the cancelled plans.
這頁的草稿，和未採用的其中一張分鏡方案
這張繪製花了比我預期中還久，主因是我一直在重畫分鏡，但結果看來線條和構圖都還是太僵硬。諷刺地是個人覺得自己兩年前畫的草稿本讀起來比現在認真慢慢磨的成果還要流暢，雖然畫面蠻亂的啦。
接下來我可能會花比較多時間專注在構圖和分鏡上，所以線條大概會比較潦草一點，不過也可能試一半就放棄又回來慢慢磨線稿(攏汗)是說這本明明就是輕鬆搞笑本有必要這麼認真嗎~~~
Comments
Thanks! Those additional uploads also help me remember the process I've been through because I'm quite forgetful xD
K T
Damn, these are really nice.
stunning as always ♡
xiaa
It's really cool to see the changes you make during comic planning to make a panel layout you're proud of!! So much work for each page.
