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A Vast And Endless Sky v3
🕑 Added 2025-05-15 20:26:01 +0000 UTCRees's story again--and this time it feels much more complete. As usual, comments are welcome as I am planning to put this in the second anthology. This current draft runs at about 12.5k words, which is a little over our desired limit so of course I would consider judicious cuts.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bhvtLxhyJ-o1T8Ba7T0gU57W_JUc82P_pGP6y1joHLg/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Kujiiro
This was a really interesting read. Love the direction it took, really cute in a lot of parts. As one who's not quite as learned on your species and their universes, this is a great one-off on its own. I'm not so good at visualizing a lot of the environment descriptions, but the characters and dialogue started making me envy Rees' position a bit lol.
Kaylos Stonecutter
Not been keeping tabs on this, so apologies. If the start is the genuine start and I'm not just missing previous bits, a little vagueness is indeed causing a little trouble, but if this is more bein familiar with world lore, then it's probably relatively fine (it's just lack of information). I feel like there's more I'd want to know and learn, but consider it's current length you still did a pretty good job at what you did deliver within the content provided!
