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🕑 Added 2025-05-09 06:04:34 +0000 UTCThis was a surprise gift story written by the wonderful Delan3 on Fa, based on one of my old drawings with my xolo sona, I invite you to read it and give the original author too much love, they are so cool and have some wonderful stories on their FA page, thanks for the support, enjoy the story
For the author, makes me happy you like my work and I'm flattered to see you get inspired by my universe here, thanks a lot!
The story is an ALT version of the previous pic "Almost Chow", what happened if our big xolo boyo, unaware, ate his dad during his lunch time.
ATTENTION: INCLUDES DIGESTION SCENES
It all started as a simple, innocent chore.
Canek, ever the helpful husband, had volunteered to assist his towering Xolo wife in preparing their son's lunch. Their boy had grown so much lately, now a massive anthro Xolo, big as his mother, and naturally, his appetite had grown to match. Preparing his lunch meant handling ingredients large as smaller buildings compared to Canek. Slabs of juicy meat, leafy greens, slices of cheese as thick as mattresses.
It was a project that needed coordination, balance, and unfortunately for Canek, a bit more caution than he had.
Canek lost his footing. One wrong step on a slippery tomato slice sent him tumbling forward, buried between mounds of toppings. Before he could had get out of the sandwich, another slice of bread came crashing down, sealing him inside in a fortress of food. Sealed inside the sandwich, Canek quickly realized how dire his situation was. Panic took root in his chest as he realized how utterly helpless he was. The overwhelming weight of the toppings pinned him down, every breath a fight against the smothering layers of bread, and vegetables. His world was dark, humid, and suffocating.
Then, without warning, the whole sandwich shifted violently.
From the outside, gigantic fingers grasped the sandwich, lifting it with casual ease. Her wife wrapped foil around his prison. Canek was jolted as the entire structure tilted and swung. Before he could make sense of the motion, his prison was wrapped around him neatly. The paper squeezed down around the bread, compacting the sandwich and making it even harder for Canek to get out.
A muffled, booming sound came from outside. The cheerful voice of his wife, chatting, oblivious to her husband’s dire plight. Then came another shift, a sickening, stomach-dropping fall as the sandwich was dropped. Most likely into a giant backpack. Canek has three layers to get out of.
”Help! Help!”
He screamed for help, thrashed against the heavy layers. But to his horror, his muffled voice was lost amid the morning rush. Without realizing it, his wife finished wrapping the colossal sandwich in layers of foil and stuffed it into an enormous backpack, unaware that her tiny husband had become part of the meal.
Inside the bag, Canek’s world became a rolling, swaying nightmare. The sandwich tumbled and bumped against the school supplies. Each jostle battered the tiny human within his edible coffin, sometimes mashing his face into tomato or burying him deeper into the spongy bread. The air grew thicker, hotter, staler.
As time passed, the miniscule speck struggled harder, desperately trying to wriggle free, to push himself toward the edges of the sandwich. Every slight movement of the backpack was a new ordeal. When the bag was lifted, the sandwich pressed down on him harder. When it was set down, it jolted him violently, sending everything squashing and sliding around him. Even the muffled sounds beyond the foil, voices, laughter, and footsteps were distorted, distant echoes. Sometimes he heard the creak of chairs, and the low rumble of conversation.
Hours passed.
By the time lunchtime came, Canek managed to struggle to the very edge of his prison. But the foil proved to be impenetrable for him. He gasped for air between the the lettuce and bread. In the middle of the crowded school cafeteria, a loud, ripping sound shattered the suffocating darkness, followed by a blinding burst of light flooding into Canek’s crumpled world. He blinked rapidly, squinting against the glare, his body sticky and battered. He barely had time to register the shift before a terrifying sight filled his vision. A colossal muzzle loomed above him.
Canek’s son opened his mouth with eagerness only a growing boy could have. His muzzle split into a massive grin, saliva already pooling at the sight of the feast. The Xolo boy’s nostrils flared wide, sniffing eagerly, pulling in the delicious scent of the sandwich, and Canek along with it. The hot breath gusted down onto the sandwich, washing over Canek like a furnace blast, carrying the damp, meaty smell of the boy’s saliva. Threads of saliva stretched between the parted jaws. The tongue, thick and powerful, flexed expectantly within the yawning cavern. Huge fingers squeezed the sandwich, lifting it to his muzzle without hesitation, not even a glance. Canek barely had time to scream.
”NO, NO, NO! WAIT!”
The huge mouth descended. Wet darkness engulfed him as his son’s mouth closed around his tiny dad, that part of the sandwich shoved inside. The world grew hot, wet, and suffocating. The first slow chew came crashing down. His body was pressed between bits of half-chewed food, the roof of the gigantic mouth, and the powerful tongue. He kicked and squirmed, but it was no use. The chewing was slow, careful, yet to Canek, it was like being caught between moving mountains.
Saliva poured around him in the warm flood, soaking him completely. It pooled in every crevice, drenching the bread until it broke apart into soggy, oozing mush. Each compression threatened to snap him in half. Every moment drenched him deeper in saliva and the disintegrating remains of lunch. Canek was battered from every side. Each violent squeeze crushed him against sodden lumps of food, forcing the acrid slurry into his mouth and nose. He gagged, trying to fight upward, but the folds came again, heavier this time, mashing him deeper into the slop. The tongue constantly shifted, heaving upward, then plunging down.
After a final, thoughtful grind of the molars, the tongue herded the chewed mass to the back of the mouth. Canek felt the shift, the squeeze, the sudden unstoppable pull downward. He barely had time to brace himself.
One massive gulp.
And the tiny human was gone. Canek, wrapped in sticky, chewed food, was dragged helplessly down into the dark abyss below. Slid effortlessly down his own son’s throat along with a mouthful of sandwich. Not a single soul in the cafeteria suspected a thing. Why would they? Canek was just an insignificant speck in there. He was just part of the food at this point.
The descent was brutal.
Darkness and merciless force pulled the tiny man down into the abyss. Each movement was rhythmic but a violent squeeze, pull. Canek slid helplessly down the tight, muscular tunnel of his son’s esophagus. The muscles squeezed him downward in rhythmic waves, the walls slimy and suffocating. Saliva and chewed food clung to him, soaking him to the bone. It smeared across his body. He gasped uselessly in the choking heat. The muffled sounds of the cafeteria above faded away, replaced by the heavy, organic, deafening squelches and gurgles of his son's body at work.
The constant boom of the heart hammered into Canek’s ears and mind, making it impossible to think straight. No matter how much he struggled or screamed, the body around him just kept going, its natural rhythms was uncaring, vast, and totally out of his control. Each thunderous thud reverberated through the slick walls. No part of the boy’s colossal body noticed the tiny thrashing inside. To his son, Canek was no more significant than a crumb slipping toward digestion. The living machine around him simply continued, tireless and unaware.
Then, the walls opened up, and he dropped inside his demise.
He landed with a sickening splash in the vast, churning cauldron of the boy’s stomach. Around him, the remnants of the first bite sloshed and bobbed. Shreds of lettuce, bits of tomato, and the mushy bread. The air was thick with the sharp, acrid stench of stomach acids beginning their ruthless work on him. Even if his son loved him, his belly was indifferent in Canek's fate. The chamber moved and churned constantly in a sickening chorus of digestion.
The constant boom of his son’s heartbeat echoed through the fleshy walls, steady and unyielding. It wasn’t deafening like in the esophagus. It was the low, deep thud of a giant drum, pulsing somewhere far above but strong enough to make the very air tremble. Every beat seemed to press gently through the walls, a heavy reminder that Canek was trapped inside something alive. The sounds were everywhere, filling the humid, churning darkness like a slow tide.
He tried to stand, but the mucous-coated floor gave no footholding. He stumbled and fell, splashing into burning pools of acidic slurry. Pain flared across his skin as the corrosive fluids began their inevitable work, gnawing through clothing and biting into his skin. Above him, the walls quivered again, a deep gurgling roar echoed from the passage above.
More food has been squeezed through.
With a sickening squelch, another bolus of chewed sandwich plummeted down into the stomach. It splashed into the already sloshing pool, sending ripples of acid and chewed debris crashing over Canek’s battered form. Shredded lettuce, strips of tomato, and clumps of soggy bread landed on him. The digestion grew fiercer by the second. The new arrivals only fed the stomach’s frenzy, the walls pulsating harder, mashing food and flesh together in a swirling, churning nightmare. Acid hissed as it broke down the fresh mouthfuls, blending them into the seething slurry that now engulfed Canek.
Each new gulp brought heavier, slimier wreckage crashing into the sloshing pit where Canek struggled. A strip of cheese the size of a blanket draped itself over him, pinning him beneath its greasy weight. Desperately, he clawed at it, his fingers burning as the acidic fluids weakened him further. His senses were overwhelmed by the stench of digestion and the relentless, deafening gurgles of his son’s satisfied gut at work.
Another massive gulp above, and a flood of mashed-up bread and tomato poured in, soaking him anew, burying him deeper in the gurgling mire. It was as if the stomach celebrated its bounty, working harder, churning faster, mixing the slurry into a thicker, hotter soup of broken-down food. The stomach walls groaned and flexed, undulating with powerful contractions. Each wave compressed the food and Canek with a brutal force.
”Help! Help!”
SLOSH GURGLE SLURSH GROOOOON
His cries for help were muffled by the endless gurgles and growls of the massive belly at work. The acids ate through the sandwich remnants just as well as his clothes. Reducing them to formless mush around him. His skin could sting first, then go numb. His limbs grew heavier, weaker, as his strength was drained by the oppressive heat, the burning sting, the relentless churning.
Time lost meaning inside the boiling prison. Each minute was dragged out and felt like an hour. His mind clouded with agony and helplessness. Every breath he managed to gasp was filled with sour, noxious fumes. His vision blurred, even if he couldn't see anything in the dark. As the acid worked on him, his body softened under its relentless assault. Canek’s world shrank to nothing but burning, sloshing darkness.
As Canek struggled in the boiling, churning darkness, a memory flickered through his mind, bright and painfully sweet.
He saw himself standing at the kitchen counter, years ago. His son had been so "small" then, barely tall enough for his wide, eager eyes to peek over the edge of the table. The boy’s ears had twitched in excitement as he watched his tiny papa working on the sandwich. Claws tapping against the wood in impatient curiosity. Every movement, every simple action had been magic in the boy’s eyes. The memory burned bright for a moment, his son's delighted face, the smell of warm bread, the pride swelling in Canek’s heart as he saw the sandwich vanish into the mouth of the Xolo boy.
Slowly, inevitably, his small form dissolved into the slurry of his son’s meal, becoming nothing more than a forgotten, unseen part of the giant Xolo boy’s digestion. The massive son let out a casual, satisfied belch in the classroom, thumping his chest lightly with a grin. His friends laughed as the three macro were completely unaware what happened inside their friend.
By the end of school, deep within him, the last traces of Canek were broken down. In the end, Canek had given everything, body and soul, to his son. Now, he was nothing but nourishment, sustaining the very life he loved.
Comments
Denis Loup
This is an warning for you Natimer, your magic techniques won't save you if I swallow you for teasing me 😈
Denis Loup
Thanks for the wonderful gift, I will love this story forever :D.
Nomad15
Happy to give you this story. :D
Natimer
Poor guy, I’d hate to see the aftermath of him being missing
