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PokéSync: B3 — 38. A Fire Inside

🕑 Added 2023-10-18 07:13:32 +0000 UTC

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SME

Yeah, I know it would have been cool to see in parts but I tried this way to see how the time skip would do let me know what you think for the next few chapters to see if it worked well.

Opala

"A Fire Inside" A fire inside what? Perhaps inside a skirt? ;) Anyways; a time skip is probably for the best given how this story is being written/published. A normal, paper novel, might have been better off with a training montage, but it'd be a bit slow when limited to weekly chapters.

Rebelious

Would be funny to see if she's like Gray Fullbuster after her training lol

SME

You are totally right! I'll fix that right now. Thanks, Bassfreek. Val hasn't had a chance to look through it. Von catches a lot of the easy stuff in Pokesync, but it does have fewer proofreading eyes than the other series. I even had a Sora mistake that Von caught before I released it. I made another Sora mistake on the discord in a conversation in the Pokesync 10 channel. My mind is apparently filled with foxes xD

bassfreek

“Wait, what?”  Amira paused her next angle of attack against the ‘Snowflake Princess’ to jump into the discussion. -- is this supposed to be Lori based on Amira coming back in the following paragraphs and the context of what Lori was doing with Dawn...and the way she speaks..

SME

As an Author Note about the ending of the chapter (for those that want to avoid spoilers before reading): I can understand why time skips can be controversial. That being said, I'm going to be showing the fruits of what they went through, and by showing them off in the coming chapters. I feel like if I did it in week batches of basically six chapters for the whole time skip, it would take forever since we'd need to show what happened to EVERYONE. So, I'll be able to mitigate that time sink by having short recaps and stories that are passed between Rhea and her friends as time goes by and moves or techniques are displayed in battle or in the story. For the next chapter, where they all meet up, Rhea and Party are returning to close the book on where the trouble started on their Kanto journey and begin a new volume. We set the foundation for a lot of stuff, so now we get to explore some of the kickstarts of their rise to the Kanto Silver Cup. (The training isn't over, or in other words, the doors aren't all open, but the girls were given the keys to unlock them).

SME

Seems Patreon has its issues with italics again...


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