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RISE: B1 — 1. Storming Nightmare

🕑 Added 2024-10-16 00:07:08 +0000 UTC
RISE: B1 — 1.  Storming Nightmare

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Opala

🦅🌩️🔥🐉

SME

It is a typo lol 😂 I’ll fix it in a bit. Yeah chapter two goes into more detail and world building, along with Ayla’s character development. I was able to write a good two pages yesterday. We’ll see how much time I have after Pokesync edits and tomorrow’s ATM chapter today. o7

Gelatinous Cube

Dayum, that's grim. You definitely have me hooked now. Hoping there's some world building in ch. 2, as I feel a little lost right now. Found maybe a typo? "Why does Ayla look smaller? Wow, I’m a mess?" I think that's supposed to be Amaris, but as it turned out to be a dream, I'm not sure.


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