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About Violence in Stories...
🕑 Added 2023-03-07 01:33:31 +0000 UTCSo I have a few castration scenes here and there...
The first one, Paddled, was entirely intentional and I felt it was good from a story perspective. Even if the AI kind of botched it.
The second, from the Housewife request, was requested specifically.
The latest however, was kind of my choice and I feel like I did it more for the story's climax then for the actual "Excitement." It was more like, I feel like there needs to be a moment in these forced fem stories where the main character is forced to admit defeat or accept their fate. I thought the violent scene did a pretty good job of the that for the narrative.
However, sometimes I just look at the end result and feel it's excessive. It doesn't bother me or disturb me, it just kind of lacks decency? Which is saying a lot coming from me. I don't want to jump scare you guys either with a surprise castration scene.
I see the appeal though. I specifically wanted a scene like that in the Paddled story because it was about bullying and forced fem domination from the start, so it fit.
Let me ask you guys though, are you bothered by those violent scenes where the main character gets their body "modified?" Let me know and in the future I can try and cut to and from scenes like that without showing to many gory details.
Like by having the main character try and make a run for it or fight the anesthesia then cutting to an image of them post-op.
Comments
Arawn93
Yeah I don’t really care for it.Would be perfectly fine if it still happens, but offscreen.
Yeah from these initial results I think I'll avoid castration scenes in the future, or at least tone down the blood. I'm somewhere between 2 and 3 personally. Sometimes it works for me, most of the time it doesn't.
MallMannequin
I'm not bothered by the violence. And depending on my mood/story it enhances as well. Though i typically prefer less graphic things like the castration. I have no issues with rape or the main character getting beaten up, it's even sweeter when they got it coming.
