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Disastrous Delivery Full Text + Raws (71/71) NSFW
🕑 Added 2023-04-01 10:42:27 +0000 UTCDelivery Truck driver Jake Newson finally saved enough to start a new life in another town. Little does he know, his final customer has a plan of her own for Jake's new life...
Finally finished this request. Some of the scenes were pretty hard, but I like how it turned out in the end. Those group shots at the end were no joke, very heavily edited and I apologize if it breaks your immersion as always.. I think it turned out well though, althoughs omething about the writing felt a bit off to me...
Maybe that's because I've been working on this for like 11 hours straight today...
Not fishing for sympathy or anything, seriously let me know if something feels off about the writing. I'm no writer, and my stuff is fairly generic I feel, but I maybe I rushed the epilogue too much this time?
Idk. Let me know what you think in the comments or DM.
Once again, thanks for sticking around with me depite all the issues this month. Hopefully this makes it up to you.
Comments
I agree. I'll write about this in my update I have a few things to say on the matter.
oh sorry let me post the zip. Whenever I print to PDF the aspect ratios get weird, so I prefer ZIPs. It's because the images within are so many varying sizes and the native windows PDF maker tries to confrm them all to one style. Maybe I'm just illiterate about making good PDFs though... If there's a better way to make PDFs (for free) lmk please.
Danique Lamboo
I think you could have made this an ongoing story if you did something inbewteen the month break and maybe made her the mother. send him to school go on a picnic or girls tea party. introduced at work as daughter. police trying to find him cause his vehicle was still there. send him to an aunt overseas who mistakes him for an actual niece. grow up there. but still fully against it all. etc. Loved it but could have gone way longer in my opinion.
Lordimature
Love it. Do you have a pdf version? Easier to read
