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HP Chapter 65: The End of Third Year

🕑 Added 2025-09-01 18:58:09 +0000 UTC
HP Chapter 65: The End of Third Year

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Edward Ravenbear

This part makes know sense. If Anne is so sure of the plot and it cannot be changed, then then by the same logic she cannot be hurt or kill unless she is named in the plot. Which she is not.

Valeria_

"bound by inevitable entanglement" is almost meaningless. "bound by bounds" is synonymous and tautological. "Betrayal and trust will unfold" is tortured language as well. You are trying to use the intransitive form, meaning either: "develop" or "become known" "trust will develop" isn't your intended meaning and 'trust will become known' isn't something people say, you 'have trust', you 'know you are trusted', you can "betray trust", but trust does not 'become'. I have to assume you were trying to avoid saying "the truth will be revealed" by substitution, but it just doesn't work. "Her choices will determine her path" Is also tautological "The Dark Lord’s return… will bring death… and despair…” Is also vacuous, Anne knows about canon. Edit: hit enter too soon putting in paragraphs. The gist here is that the prophecy doesn't say anything specific and is less than useless, what is the point of it narratively? Compare that to the original, which set Harry and Tom in direct opposition and changed the course of both wizarding wars, such as they were.


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