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🕑 Added 2016-03-30 04:43:58 +0000 UTCNSFW due to inappropriate touching and balls.
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THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR AMAZING SUPPORT! We've gotten like 15 more Patrons since I posted the rewards teaser. I know we're not at that milestone just yet, but with this month's patronage, we're finally going to upgrade Leslie's all-in-one computer set up to an actual desktop computer! Something with actual proper color display so she doesn't have to get on my computer to shade pages. It's all thanks to you guys! THANK YOU SO MUCH!
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Comments
Brad and Leslie Brown
Seth is talking last in panel 2, and Georgie is interrupting him in panel 3. We kinda broke a composition rule by swapping the placement of Georgie/Seth's speech balloons in panel 2. Seth really should have been speaking first so his line would appear on the left where he is, but we thought the sexiness of the scene was more important than proper speech balloon placement. We couldn't figure out a way to make the balloons flow better so it feels more natural when Georgie interrupts Seth, and I really should have rewritten panel 2 to fix the speech balloon placement, but we didn't have the time to completely rework the page. Sadly, not every page is going to be perfect and sometimes it's better to just power through it to make sure updates come out in a timely manner. If we have time later down the line, we'll think of a way to fix it. Thanks for the critique!
Makenz Peterson
I think a speech bubble is missing... the flow from panel 2 to 3 doesn't make sense.
