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🕑 Added 2016-07-30 02:28:35 +0000 UTC New PAAAAAGE. Just a nice scene-establishing page.http://rockcocks.slipshine.net/comic/page-195
So, good thing about writing a full chapter in advance is that there's plenty of time to make the script better. I'm currently going through this whole chapter and doing rewrites wherever it needs, tightening stuff up and cutting out unnecessary stuff. While there's been a lot of praise about Rock Cocks as a comic, there's also a lot of complaints about its pacing, both that it's too slow AND too fast. So I'm trying my best to fix that, lingering more on little character moments and trimming down the fat that doesn't move the plot forward. I won't spoil anything for you guys, so you'll just have to see how this turns out and let me know if I did a good job, writing-wise. Leslie, she always does a wonderful job with the art, no question about that.
See you early next week!
