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Unexpected Affections Ch. 94-96

🕑 Added 2025-10-08 00:34:39 +0000 UTC

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Robin Holden

It was a wierd chunk, the transitions were less flushed out than normal, the jump from sec with April to the heat wave was odd. The whole first 1/2 of the heatwave is kot your best work, its a struggle to figure whos talking and why the hell is Hannah there, is Ollie there, is just a tough read. I know it get clarified but its still not great. I love the story, but this is not best chapter

Graham Cairns

I live in a place where heatwaves often end in summer storms. Why do I feel like storm clouds are brewing for Olly and the gang? But also that Oliver will be like him namesake in the musical, and soon be asking "Please sir, may I have some more?" :-)


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