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Unexpected Affections Ch. 109-113

🕑 Added 2025-11-15 05:38:09 +0000 UTC

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Sinful Cyanide

Yeah, at this point I'm starting to wonder if it might be better if Hannah or Hikkaru was the mcs public facing girlfriend since April definitely has split loyalties with how things are developing with Zara.

Robin Holden

The absolute filthy kinky dirty things Margot says to Oliver at times just blow my mind...and almost cause me to change my pants. So filthy, so descrptive, almost perfection, so hot

Duke Mongo

Nice chapter and cliffhanger. I was wondering how Ollie was going to get April’s approval to be with his other female friends. But Zara coming back moves the ball in that direction. And now a new character related to April. Interesting.

Zaralith

I don't see this as a unilateral decision because he isn't asking her to move in with him and April, he is telling her that they would be happy to have her living in the city with them and wouldn't keep her out of their relationship and that he personally won't have a problem if her relationship with April goes further, none of which are really decisions but more soothing Zara's own worries.

Zaralith

Always with the cliffhangers. Great chapters

Random Bloggerdude

I was actually re-reading the series when this came up. I love this story.

AndyWanKenobi

Is this new girl Mina or Minda? You used both names

TRT

Awesome! My only "twinge" was a "true to character" wobble in Ollie's discussion with Zara... Unless you are planning to introduce that story swerve as potential conflict, it was a unilateral decision, without consulting April. We just had a huge setup from Margot about how Ollie HADN'T changed, and then this surprised me. Great work and an amazingly prolific month, Break, but that one point stuck out.