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DM and the Dirty 20s Ch 63-64

🕑 Added 2025-07-18 02:56:13 +0000 UTC

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BreaktheBar

Writing OFG and then UA put me into a tailspin, hahaha. I caught myself writing 2nd person several times and fixd it. Guess I didn't catch all of them. It'll get fixed!

BreaktheBar

I'm just happy to be getting my mojo back!

Juggermouse

Envious of your output ability, damn glad to be on the receiving end of it though. Great stuff, Break. Watching and waiting for the next one.

Mehntal1st

Another great chapter my man. D&D has never been my scene but I'm really enjoying this story....great characters with unique plot transitions between the fantasy world and the real one. Not to mention that amazing ability you have of portraying relatable and heartfelt interactions that draw the reader in, investing them in their relationships and the story as a whole. I'm not going to fuss over the grammar or your old nemesis, the 'E' key, since you are getting back to nature in your Zen retreat. 🙂 But you slipped into that god-awful 2nd person perspective several times which is always jarring and my only real complaint.


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