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NO ELIZABETH, DON'T BITE YOUR HAND OFF LIKE A COYOTE, YOU'LL PROBABLY NEED IT! It's really fun writing Elizabeth's thoughts like this, she's a fun character to get inside of. I used to actually have a "no thought balloons" rule for writing because I wanted to try to convey their thoughts through other means, but these chapters really couldn't be possible without seeing Elizabeth's thoughts. Now I'm just excited to do chapters focusing on other characters and delving into how their thought process works! I think Steg would be a really fun character to focus on later. Anyone you're interested in? Let me know!
See you on Monday!
Comments
Alysflowers xx
I'm missin my girl Suria, but her thought process just might be too hectic... or horny? Hmm... 🧐
Goliath
Oh most definitely want to know the inner workings of Steg.
Mr.Bond
Georgie was the true mastermind behind everything going wrong THE WHOLE TIME lol.
AFrickinDwarf
She's so obvious about it, my word
Hades Official Channel
OOOOH COME OOOON LIZ DX
Sirvandeyxviii
EXTREMELY interested in hearing Steg's thoughts. You've been fucking phenomenal storytellers so far, and used the inner monologue to fantastic effect!
I would personally love to know more about Steg! And Suria too! They're both my favorites. :3 so pleeeaaassseeee please give us insight to the inside of Stegs beautiful head 😍💙✨
Kato
I've been liking the internal monologue direction a lot! I would love to see a Coral POV section someday. Georgie, too imo
Quadrant
Pretty sure dating coworkers is fine as long as you stay within guidelines. I.e. go for it Lizzie. Clearly dig each other. Why deny what both hearts are yearning for?
Bleuryder
Question, and I mean no disrespect whatsoever, but will we ever see Dakota without his binder? I don't mind either way, nor do I know if it's disrespectful to ask, it's just curiosity since he always has it on or if it'll come into the plot in some way.
Daniel S
She’s going to need that hand to grab his butt in a minute!
FuuMixALot
I love how this is the perfect combo of wholesome and sexy. I fucking love this story and characters.
Yes! I absolutely love the thought bubbles - there's a time and a place, for sure, and I love how you've made them work so far. You go, Liz!!!
