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Chapter 98 : Reunion After 7 Years (5) Last

🕑 Added 2021-04-14 17:27:40 +0000 UTC

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John Paul

Too long xD but Angelica seems nice.

Johnny

Also just thought of a future delivery suggestion if you want to hear it then read on. Client: Ryuu Lion World: Danmachi Request: Something to save her familia mates from death. Time: During Evilus’ ambush on the 25th/27th floor. Requires items: Either strong healing spells or materials (potions, herbs, poultices) to bring multiple people back from the brink of death. Notable Events: Second time bringing medical aid to help a elf in another world. Chance to meet Freya for panty shenanigans whilst gaining gratitude from both Ryuu, her familia, and the goddess of Justice Astrea. Also a chance for him to really test out and practice his magic side of skills while helping in the dungeon, where even gods fear the lower levels. Also a chance to interact with one of the best waifus and help her eye problem (Hephaestus) and maybe help a younger emotionally stunted Aiz Wallenstein to grow up being less emotionally stunted... Ok, there’s a lot to do in the Danmachi world now that I think about it. Like saving a cute pollum girl from physical and emotional abuse. Saving a cute fox girl from emotional and mental abuse at the red light district. And plenty I can’t think of right now, but they are there. Tsubasa and Rivera shenanigans and more. I’d suggest to have that arc be a longer arc, maybe a [Expedition Delivery] or something that warns Kyle that he will be there a while doing multiple deliveries in one run instead of a single delivery, so he can prepare first. Phew, that was a long suggestion, you don’t have to take it all but I hope it helps with creative inspirations!

Johnny

Right so, the fact that you brought the name Darkness from Konosuba up I am thinking you want to make her a masochist and the fact Kyle’s aura just did it’s thing that M-side of her could be unexpectedly triggered making to where instead of fear she felt arousal instead. So, as a suggestion, unless you plan to drag him to Konosubaverse at some point why not just insert her as a younger Darkness (full name: Dustiness Ford Lalatina) pre-maso tendencies, but first started developing from hanging around Esdeath and then further triggered unintentionally by Kyle just now. Of course if you DO plan to take him to Konosubaverse at some point, because let’s face it there are a lot of cute girls even if they are a bit quirky, which isn’t a bad thing imo, I would suggest the name Angelica Merion Kōtei (Kōtei was the last name of the original emperor from canon I believe). Name suggestion for no other reason then because I like how it sounds.


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