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Chapter 41: Of Claws, Tails, Fangs, Eyes and Tusks (Finale)

🕑 Added 2023-05-16 16:46:47 +0000 UTC

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Sondrex76

Nice story and chapter. It is interesting to see the psychotic Renner start to develop the very faintest glimmer of humanity inside herself. While reading I found a few potential minor misspellings and such: https://archiveofourown.org/works/27431674/chapters/119661880#workskin "his opponent size and d" -> "his opponent's size and d" "king away is eye" -> "king away his eye" "er opponent speed, Laky" -> "er opponent's speed, Laky" "opponent right side" -> "opponent's right side" "Lakyus' was well awar" -> Lakyus was well awar"" "as reflects weren't as good a" -> "as reflexesweren't as good a" "us power boost, but everything has " -> "us' power boost, but everything has " "ready to severe that bond" -> "ready to sever that bond" "lly seems another perso" -> "lly seems like another perso" https://archiveofourown.org/works/27431674/chapters/119662000#workskin "worst. 'Is this what a mu" -> "worse. 'Is this what a mu" "t my brother's too… he " -> "t my brother too… he " https://archiveofourown.org/works/27431674/chapters/119662057#workskin "while only few drops " -> "while only a few drops " https://archiveofourown.org/works/27431674/chapters/119662057#workskin "e more than rubbles, then and o" -> "e more than rubble, then and o" "The princess… new pr" -> "The princess's… new pr" https://archiveofourown.org/works/27431674/chapters/119662114#workskin "give you a few advice" -> "give you some advice" "nized as her dau" -> "nized as his dau" ". Ahe was feeling too cold to p" -> ". She was feeling too cold to p" https://archiveofourown.org/works/27431674/chapters/119662165#workskin "bordinate. The responsibility was j" -> "bordinates. The responsibility was j" ", or straight up defect." -> ", or straight up defection." https://archiveofourown.org/works/27431674/chapters/119662165#workskin " subject even more an" -> " subjects even more an" 29 "normal servant thought" -> "normal servants thought" "my heirs lives, she also b" -> "my heirs' lives, she also b" "Empire’s noble was planning" -> "Empire’s nobles was planning" "to chock her. By sheer" -> "to choke her. By sheer" 30 "servant, discard her" -> "servants, discard her" "betraying the guild fundamental reason of existence" -> "betraying the guild's fundamental reason for existence" "protocol, leave alone a blatant one such" -> "protocol, let alone a blatant one such" "suffered less from all of this" -> "suffered least from all of this" "taxes too, nothing more" -> "taxes to, nothing more" "gesture who prompted" -> "gesture which prompted" "Japanese, Satoru" -> "Japanese man, Satoru" "stare contest to force" -> "staring contest to force" "reason whys she was currently" -> "reason why she was currently" "the princess face as she" -> "the princess's face as she" 31 "of droll come to her mouth" -> "of drool come to her mouth" "word was rule." -> "word was law." 32 "not let her otherwise" -> "not let her go otherwise" than these empty bootlicking"" -> than this empty bootlicking"" "the Kingdom classist system, but" -> "the Kingdom's classist system, but" "Yest?”" -> "Yes?”" 33 "thought that such mindset would" -> "thought that such a mindset would" "he looked better, the usual tranquil" -> "he looked closer, the usual tranquil" "How in the world does she think" -> "Who in the world does she think" "cloak just ignored" -> "cloak and just ignored" 34 "of trees where already" -> "of trees were already" "they growing population" -> "their growing population" "blamed it’s me." -> "blamed is me." "way near she sheer skill Leinas" -> "way near the sheer skill Leinas" "exercising after their return" -> "training after their return" "in someone’s other?" -> "in someone else’s?" "gobbling became to appear from the" -> "goblins began to appear from the" "unfortunately enough goblin who" -> "unfortunate goblin who" "unharmed but not less threatening." -> "unharmed but no less threatening." "it the since the very" -> "it since the very" "his plate went a few meters" -> "his plate and went a few meters" "body was certain far" -> "body was certainly far" "explaining. She saw like his" -> "explaining. It seemed like his" 35 "tapped two times her desk wit" -> "tapped her desk two times wit" "spunned around, a poisoned needle betw" -> "spun around, a poisoned needle betw" "curiosity into the lizardman, he" -> "curiosity in the lizardman, he" "defeating it’s previous wielder" -> "defeating its previous wielder" "to good of a term, those" -> "too nice of a term, those" "students tried to hid behind him. Leina" -> "students tried to hide behind him. Leina" "so? What we have to do of all of" -> "so? What do we have to do with all of" "object the lizardmen" -> "objects the lizardmen" "blameless hen all faults fell on Satoru" -> "blameless then all faults fell on Satoru" 36 "starting to think like there was" -> "starting to think there was" "into those eyes, so similar to the colo" -> "in those eyes, so similar to the colo" "Something is bother you" -> "Something is bothering you" "test it our and only then" -> "test it and only then" "hope parley party are not" -> "hope parley parties are not" "would be attending meeting or reading reports" -> "would be attending meetings or reading reports" 37 "accompained heavy thumps" -> "accompained by heavy thumps" "to let it all behind" -> "to leave it all behind" "wildered of Frost Pain" -> "wielder of Frost Pain" "Lakyus amazement was" -> "Lakyus's amazement was" "four head fixed on her" -> "four heads fixed on her" "couple step forward before" -> "couple steps forward before" "didn’t hiss again" -> "but didn’t hiss again" "her companion showed themselves" -> "her companions showed themselves" "taller than it but both Leinas" -> "a bit taller than it but both Leinas" "An hydra?”" -> "A hydra?”" "fierce being of" -> "fierce beings of" "amplified earing or read his lips" -> "amplified hearing or read his lips" "other training soldier to go" -> "other training soldiers to go" "unladylike?... Well, I had to admit I might" -> "unladylike?... Well, I have to admit I might" "seeing as my last encounter" -> "seeing how my last encounter" "limits I will manage to advance" -> "limits will I manage to advance" "you? Why is the world don’t" -> "you? Why in the world don’t" "half dragon antics, not" -> "half dragon's antics, not" "far too much to not recogni" -> "far too long to not recogni" "with the major number of warriors against" -> "with the greatest number of warriors against" "the tribe completely disbanded" -> "the tribes completely disbanded" "lizardmen and too few food… and so" -> "lizardmen and too little food… and so" "much into that war, by" -> "much in that war, by" "to come him and swipe" -> "to come in and swipe" "was quite smaller than he tho" -> "was quite a bit smaller than he tho" "too and they were capable of compassion" -> "to and they were capable of compassion" "stole his ability to breath." -> "stole his ability to breathe." "but when he opened a m" -> "but when he opened it a m" "last one very hard to come true, the" -> "last one as being very hard to come true, the" "this I think it’s a worthy endeavor" -> "thus I think it’s a worthy endeavor" "wish arm upon us, there is no way he" -> "wish harm upon us, there is no way he" "referred as acting chief," -> "referred to as acting chief," "leaving a hair but what did" -> "leaving a heir but what did" "the resto of the council, or the" -> "the rest of the council, or the" 38 "full of last war’s refuges" -> "full of the last war’s refuges" "tears rather than she ever had in most" -> "tears than she ever had in most" "at her little farm she came up on" -> "at the little farm she came up on" "eager too, it seemed like a" -> "eager to, it seemed like a" "as she waited the final verdict" -> "as she waited for the final verdict" "circle she draw around Satoru’s" -> "circle she drew around Satoru’s" "any of the reason usually" -> "any of the reasons usually" "had worst nights, it was strange" -> "had worse nights, it was strange" "he might should" -> "maybe he should" "but other also gained a pensive" -> "but others also gained a pensive" "the other around him seemed to gain" -> "the others around him seemed to gain" "such a damage was repairable" -> "such damage was repairable" 39 "end poorly she would still have" -> "ends poorly she would still have" "he felt soft and caring hands embracing" -> "she felt soft and caring hands embracing" "later your yourself or" -> "later you or" "nee much sleep and I already casted" -> "need much sleep and I already casted" "His advices" -> "His advice" 40 "choice but destroy them, for the" -> "choice but to destroy them, for the" "fidgeted on place, an hard task given" -> "fidgeted in place, a hard task given" "them, the other tribe could easily crush them, e" -> "them, the other tribes could easily crush them, e" "If problem arose with Dragon Claw, the fault w" -> "If problems arose with Dragon Claw, the fault w" "help an, in time," -> "help and, in time," "smimming" -> "swimming" "see hundred if not thousands o" -> "see hundreds if not thousands o" "and defy could only come from" -> "and defiance could only come from" "latter o which seemed far more" -> "latter of which seemed far more" "the unspoken the agreement with the emperor" -> "the unspoken agreement with the emperor" "for the kingdom throne? Such" -> "for the kingdom's throne? Such" "the others members to do the same. T" -> "the other members to do the same. T" "space to breath and make up her own" -> "space to breathe and make up her own" 41 "Shasuryu stated leaving space for whoever" -> "Shasuryu started leaving space for whoever" "object on intervene. When only" -> "object or intervene. When only" "farm is, you all have already seen," -> "farm you all have already seen is," "truly had to reach a peaceful agreeme" -> "truly were to reach a peaceful agreeme" "no adamant of", not sure here "why only travelers only became common after th" -> "why travelers only became common after th" "vast amount, want with a lake and" -> "vast resources, want with a lake and" "even though his lack of any siblings of children of his own" -> "despite his lack of any siblings or children of his own" "off him the strangest" -> "off on him in the strangest" "normally an hydra should have" -> "normally a hydra should have" "should od to comfort his child" -> "should do to comfort his child" "but an hostile takeover at best" -> "but a hostile takeover at best" "find out more prospectives than you" -> "find out more perspectives than you" "whispered down casted, making" -> "whispered down cast, making" "An habit" -> "A habit" Thanks for writing and have a great day!