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Chapter 42: Contracts, Heroes, and Ice Cream

🕑 Added 2023-06-16 13:32:11 +0000 UTC

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Pedro

someone alredy find the eggs?

Sondrex76

Nice chapter. I found a few potential minor misspellings and such: "it’s that it" -> "is that it" "lizardman wasn’t try to" -> "lizardman wouldn't try to" "they might have a slightly better sounding." could maybe be "they might sound slightly better." "Let it to Lakyus to go around" -> "Leave it to Lakyus to go around" "to the princess agreement. Lakyus" -> "to the princess's agreement. Lakyus" "that troll wasn’t much of" -> "that troll wasn’t as much of" "died on that ambush. For all" -> "died in that ambush. For all" "in the kingdom even more in the capital itself" -> "in the kingdom and even more in the capital itself" "the fuck and get drunk" -> "they fuck and get drunk" "collapse at worse." -> "collapse at worst." "btu nev" -> "but nev" "so eradicated inside a country" -> "so integrated inside a country" "not let unanswered at the end of all of this," -> not let stay unanswered at the end of all of this,"" "secret meeting with" -> secret meetings with"" "and brought her to" -> "and brought it to" "delicate thing she ever tasted. So co" -> "delicious thing she ever tasted. So co" "invested by the new fashion’s enthusiasm as soon as it exploded." is a bit weird but I am not sure if or what would need to be changed "their las disastrous encounter" -> "their last disastrous encounter" "was only a mean to stop him from" -> "was only a means to stop him from" "laying exactly near Clarice’s" -> "laying near Clarice’s" "else on his persona" -> "else of his persona" Thanks for writing and have a nice day!


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