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死神ちゃんと僕と死神のおじさん5_短編RPG

🕑 Added 2023-07-31 14:42:03 +0000 UTC
死神ちゃんと僕と死神のおじさん5_短編RPG

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The God of One

Also, I'd like to see all previous scenes made into a single RPGMaker game when you have time. Though as I said before it would be best if you add more scenes and content. As its not that erotic once the heroine falls for the Main Pole.

The God of One

I liked your little scene and thought the writing while very short was good. Nice, your sound effects were nice but it would be good if we had a some moans and wet sounds to diversify the sound effects. Though, I really believe you need to focus primarily on building a longer and slower corruption story. The heroine should put up a fight and you should tease the viewer. Make us really want to see your H-scenes. Also whatever story you make should be linear to save time. I recommend looking at https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/circle/profile/=/maker_id/RG52158.html as this creator makes good NTR with simple art and sound effects.


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