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Chapter 57

🕑 Added 2025-02-01 02:09:41 +0000 UTC

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guillaume nguyen

I sure hope he can collect back all the bags when he return to the tutorial. My completionist OCD/loot Goblin mentality just hate seeing wasted shinies.

Thatoneguy

I think he sent that stuff to the people from his first tutorial

Gopard

Well the information and stuff I agree on... But leaving the tutorial? So far we literally learned Richard was trying his absolute best to stay hidden... He even made that guy swear secrecy despite that administrator revealing anything would be a deathsentence for himself. But now he will just walk around some elite huntingground 100% heavily monitored by the consortium and not at all protected by the System rules? While at the same time giving fuck all about his supposed "pupil and people he cares about"? I find it increasingly annoying how we start a plotline... (Class selection, training of Penelope, then classes for the adults, fighting the Goons, killing the Midnight Earl for class selection which came up way back, the shapers Legacy still utterly ignored, any other friends and family he may have had from before the system nonwithstanding) And then just midway through the most ridiculous turns come about and open 10 new plot lines without finishing the old ones... We STILL haven't finished the first conversation the "Watcher" had with Denise about her "Regalia" lol... I personally feel like this story suffers a bit from what I like to call the "Primal Hunter Syndrom" (a big LitRPG series which had a tutorial go for I think 200 chapters or something) this tutorial is too long... We are at chapter 57 and not yet 15 DAYS into the timeline right? The tutorial is supposed to be 30 for what the first floor? So how long will the second one take? I fear that either in say 100 chapters or so when the story goes to a more "standard" time passed per chapters ratio this "tutorial" will feel bloated/way too convoluted or alternatively we will just never even reach the peerage games because by that time Richard will already have had 200 exurions into the multiverse conquering 50 planets and 10 Solar Systems and can challenge the Gods for control over the system or something (Obviously this is a hyperbole) but well... The issue is we have no real idea HOW BAD "humanities" situation is... Would him getting a Rare Class at 15 and consequently becoming a leading figure and just telling people about prestige early have been enoug? Enough for what though? To defeat that "Divine Footsoldier" from chapter 1? Would the Shaper's Legacy itself perhaps be enough for if Richard masters that he would gain a patron strong enough to safeguard humanity from the worst of all the multiversal bullshit? Is it in any way helpful to risk making an enemy of the Consortium which seems to literally "OWN" the "system rights" to this "Integration Cycle"? How important IS Penelope ACTUALLY in the grand scheme of things? Supposedly Richard killed several Imperials in the other timeline? But also there were only 7 in all humanity and he has been saying and thiking just about at least once per chapter that she is perhaps the biggest treasure and chance for humanity, now he abandons her? Anyway my conclusion right now is this progression simply doesn't make sense for Richard who supposedly was trying to be "somewhat lowkey". And the fact he abandoned Penelope (and to a lesser extent the others) destroys most of what little realism I feel there is here? Why? Seriously why? He could certainly have bought something to just kill those guys he had a billion attribute points obviously that was enough to get a strong bomb or high grade talisman supplies get returned there for a minute, kill the earl and then he can go do whatever in the time dilation chambers. We know those grunts found a way to teleport obviously a literal SYSTEM ADMINISTRATOR could have arranged for him to go there after a quick few minutes detour into killing the Mascot.

Grant Prater

I disagree. Most exciting development so far in my opinion. He's breaking the game and allowing humanity to make full use of their newly integrated advantage, and we get to see some of the big players of the gods and consortium leadership early on.

Grant Prater

it did say it has time dilation. it's not impossible it's a very high multiplier and he thought they would be fine holding out for another few hours inside the (he may have assumed) invulnerable bubble

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! Have to admit I finds those last few chapters a bit too much... This whole "accounting error" thing and now Richard negotiating and then just leaving the tutorial feels like stretching the actual plot development for some kind of comedic relief? What would he even want in the hunting ground his tutorial doesn't already do better? He could probably also literally have ASKED the administrator to just spawn stronger enemies in his tutorial. This feels at least right at this moment as a forced way to get Richard away from the group when the evil cat and lizard minions attack.

Gopard

I wouldn't... Honestly I'm already leery with this development we seem to be going for another training montage... I also don't understand Richards thought process here at all! He KNOWS about the imminent threat outside of camp? He also knows and has easy access there too his named elite... So why the fuck ignore all of that in favour of these "new hunting grounds"? We were already told by the criminal's POV that they likely can't even compete with the system tutorial as well...

Christopher

So is the story going to be non stop doom forever?

Apoca

I thought he would grab at least some free points for mana. Also, This here seems to be a breach: they did not send him to humanity, but to a random place?

Baron of Awesome

This is the third f-ing cliffhanger in a row.

Sammot

Oh shit!

glare31337

I highly doubt BlueShear would offscreen the entire secondary cast, but I would honestly respect it if they did. Would be ballsy.

Hodge Wasson

As interesting as that negotiation may have been, those last 3 paragraphs are a BIG OOF. I really hope the kids/pregnant ladies somehow made it out ok.


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