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Interlude 13

🕑 Added 2025-02-04 00:08:58 +0000 UTC

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Matthew G

Payed vacation -> paid vacation

A B

Edit suggestion: death’s -> deaths

guillaume nguyen

Poor kid forced to see all that happen.... And by his own mother.

Gopard

So... I couldn't comment on that question post for the future plot yet. After reading this and reading it as well, I will say that I think I would personally prefer a "time skip" over the time dilated training Arc and giving us flashbacks/recountings both of what the group went through without Richard when the Mauraders and the Midnight Earl somehow forced themselves through the barrier? As well as of Richards training. Maybe in form of reflections of key parts of the training for him basically what I personally felt, at the point where we are with this story I don't really want to largely read a "pure training Arc" no matter how much sense it makes in story and how much time dilation basically allows it to happen "instantly". We simply had enough of those for my personal taste lol. I thought a skip ahead of him being directly teleported back to the tutorial and then starting to deal with whatever happened there would be good. You could still recount and have him reflect through monologues, memories, Titles he rememberes how he go them or even him talking to the others about what he did include it but basically not as dense and not completely stopping the Plot cold. Another reason why I personally would like this the most is that it takes the pressure of you as the author to "get it on with the repetitve training "number go up" training already to get to the plot" and couldn't be accused of cliffing us nearly as hard. ESPECIALLY in Webnovel format where the chapters are released one by one, working with such "time skips into flashbacks" is a good way of not making readers suffer a largely lack of plot progression on an extremy crucial and suspensfull plot twist because the MC for needs to take a few weeks/month/ years??? (Depending on what that training ground can do in terms of time dilation) for training^^ And last but not least I absolutely LOVE This interlude... Especially that you show his whole carepackage and information message not being purely positive... I have mad respect that you actually commit to only posting Interludes with normal chapters as an "extra for a day" but honestly I think if you as the author feel like an Interlude is important for the story now I would be happy to read only that that day if this essentially forcing you to double release for every Interlude should get to hard at some point! So now after writing a nice couple walls of text that may well constitute my longest comment on Patreon yet I will go on to read the next "real chapter" and am excited to find out which approach you chose!!

Gopard

Don't forget completely batshit insane for her as well...

John Koor

I would be surprised if there isn't an interlude of just opportunists deciding to kill off their little groups to gather all of the free food packs and medicines.

Apoca

I wonder if it's a net positive for Humanity as a whole. I mean sure, Daniel seems like important if a bit morally gray, and I'm sure the wellness package saved more life than harmed. But here human lives are not equal. It's possible Hellen would have released the curse either way. But it's totally possible Cassandra or Mr. Ericsson would have been one of the future pillar of Humanity. (Other than imperials. At this point I kind of doubt any curse could harm Penelope or her peers)

Hodge Wasson

Holy shit. And I thought Daniel was villainous as it was. Helen makes him look like a paragon of virtue by comparison. At least Daniel is a relatively straightforward case. Self-righteous delusional villains tend to be capable of the worst atrocities.

Bamen Sanders

Also check the header note thing if you haven’t. Changed a few things about the last chapter.

Bamen Sanders

To be continued… I ran out of time. More interludes in this vein tomorrow ❤️


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