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Chapter 61

🕑 Added 2025-02-07 04:24:24 +0000 UTC

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guillaume nguyen

"Shaper, first and foremost, I want to report the corrupted mind of your servant...."

Liam Cassilly

Thanks for the chapter!

Aaron Banta

Anyone with luck powers is automatically the protagonist! Either that or they're the main villain.... Time will tell!

Bamen Sanders

Will work on trying to make it more understandable, thanks 🙏

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! I'm not sure about the sentence just before the first POV change the one where Maya somehow gets into Eva's line of fire... I mean it's clear she ends up in the line of fire, but in it and the one after it, it's barely clear in what position she is... Was she between Marlene and the beastman, behind him hidden so well nobody saw her? When she stepped into that puddle I assume she slipped but you should probably add a word there at least... Not to mention luck is all good and stuff but how do "SLIP" out of an "Energy BEAM CAPABLE OF VAPORIZING HIGH LEVELED LIZARD MEN"? That beam should move instantaneous so I would change the scene to have her slip BEFORE she sees the beam coming and clear the positioning of her and the lizard men a bit with another line maybe? It could of course also be that this super confusing line of narration is on purpose because nothing that happened there was in any way planned but more it less just her Luck Mask kicking in?

Apoca

This is it. From now on Maya is the new protagonist. With crazy luck powers!


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