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Chapter 66

🕑 Added 2025-02-18 08:04:00 +0000 UTC

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Edit suggestion: know’s -> knows gaul -> gall forth -> fourth

Baconwargod

I’m not gonna lie after marathoning the last several chapters and going back and rereading stuff I still have no clue what’s going on. We juggle so many different perspectives at once it’s genuinely extremely hard to follow everything. This is more a multiple mc story at this point with just how rare the mc’s perspective is. And man do I wish the system was better explained. There are so many elements all at once that are just not explained well. He mucks with huge parts of the power system and it’s barely explained or hinted at so when things like him losing his prestige happen it feels like it comes out of left field. Could just be me on this one but damn. Which sucks cause your prose are strong and you’re clearly dedicated to writing good characters. It’s just there are too many of them. Besides the two adults and Penelope I genuinely have no clue who anyone is at any given time. We started out so nice and simple and have just been getting curve ball after curve ball after curve ball thrown at us. With so many concurrent subplots running simultaneously and new characters getting randomly introduced in interludes that have no effect on the sprawling plot currently taking place. It’s overwhelming as a reader. Genuinely wish you the best I’m not trying to be super negative…just damn. I really really really want to enjoy this novel everything’s there but with every perspective change and new huge part of the magic system we switch to chapter by chapter my eyes glaze over.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! Quite fun chapter... I guess it does make sense that with something called life manipulation he can overpower even someone with supposedly higher stats right? I'm more wondering about how the Lizardmen just suddenly decided to not pursue the Group honestly...

Gopard

Will we also get an explanation for why this Scraps guy just decided to ignore hunting the group? Because as far as I understood it the Midnight Earl ORDERED them to do that and that was why they were doing it and came along for the attack no?

Bamen Sanders

Woops! His stats actually max out at six hundred. Forgot he had a star of prestige. Will explain how Richard still had the upper hand next chap


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