DigiCheeze
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Art critique
🕑 Added 2021-10-31 23:04:07 +0000 UTCHey guys!! So I know my art isn’t perfect but that doesn’t mean I can’t improve :) please let me know what I can do better with my art! Whether it be backgrounds, coloring, line art, or poses
Comments
WonderPancake
Your art doesn't need to be perfect Cheeze c: Improve on whatever you see needs improving just know that I like it all the same
Anthony
It seems like the genitals in the NSFW pics need work, they seem way too crude as if they don’t use visual references enough, making them look like awkward shapes you’d see with a mediocre doujin decensor, and the cartoonish/cute & lewd artstyle can’t really excuse it. But otherwise everything seems fine for the art style you’re going for. I agree with the other guy’s comment about dynamic poses, too.
AFrickinDwarf
If you need help, the Drawfee peeps have little classes on different topics
DigiCheeze
Agree! I’ve actually been looking for a lot of dynamic poses so I’m practicing as much as I can!
ArthurCrane
I suppose a little more variety with environments would be nice. Also, some more dynamic posing. You know, putting your characters in poses that go a bit outside of the pinup comfort zone.
