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EXTENDED TEASER: "The Fat Making Notebook Goes Out to the Ball Game"
🕑 Added 2025-03-28 01:46:39 +0000 UTCI am hard at work on the next chapter in "The Fat Making Notebook" saga called "The Fat Making Notebook Goes Out to the Ball Game". It's all coming to Patreon,but if you don't want to wait you can read all of Part 1 on Discord right now if you're a 7 dollar Even More BS member. You can upgrade your membership HERE.
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Ball games are great for eating hotdogs and making people fat.
At least, that was Asami’s opinion. And it was a lovely day to take her Fat Making Notebook on a stroll back across her old college campus to take in a softball game and create some chaos.
Athletes can be just so damn stuck up, so sure of themselves and their physical abilities. She was definitely looking forward to humbling a few of them. Maybe she would put some pounds on a pitcher, chunk up a catcher. She could just picture the softball team, plenty of lovely ladies with already luscious curves feeling their pants getting tighter as their thick thighs grew thicker. She looked forward to giving some ball players ball bellies and making some arrogant athletes into helplessly hungry hogs.
Of course, getting to the field meant getting across campus first, and on this particularly beautiful day, that meant passing plenty of beauties ready to be a bit more bountiful.
The first victim that Asami found worthy of transforming, a rather haughty looking blonde woman with a confident strut that Asami found to be just a bit too arrogant, got her usual warm up transformation, a nice big blubbery belly. The woman was wearing a crop top to showcase the toned nature of her trim tummy, but that tummy soon became quite tubby, and the belly baring shirt became the perfect way to showcase the now blubbery blonde’s new pudgy pot belly. Her growing gut bounced out in front of her and sloshed up and down with each step. Those steps were now far more laborious as Asami took away the woman’s confident strut by way of thickening her thighs enough to give her a much more awkward waddle.
Those thighs, once toned, were now beyond tubby. They were thick thunder thighs made of fat that shook, slapped, and rubbed together with each slow step. It was a rather comical thing as Asami had kept most of the blonde’s upper body the same, almost as a way of showing off just how unearned her perceived previous vanity was. She retained her narrow face most of her upper body, though slightly softened, remained trim. Then she absolutely exploded with fat from the belly downward. While her gut and her thunder thighs were the real highlights, there was no denying that this randomly chosen blonde victim now had an incredibly fat and flabby ass as well, a doughy dumper gifted with a supreme amount of sway. Her blubbery butt cheeks bounced up and down and side to side as she clearly began to become winded from her waddling.
Asami chuckled to herself as she watched the blonde who once looked like she could have run a marathon had to stop to catch her breath. The blonde’s big belly plopped onto the tops of her thick thighs as she doubled over. Her hands sunk into the soft flesh of her flabby thunder thighs as she took a few labored breaths and then really had to push herself to get going again. Thanks to the now extremely tight, fit almost to bursting, Asami got to enjoy the way the blonde’s fat legs had developed swollen cankles, fat ankles and calves that were made even more swollen by the exertion she was experiencing.
The fact that this blonde was reduced to huffing and puffing was a great source of amusement to Asami who knew that the previously fit woman would now be stuck as a shuffling fatty probably posting well positioned photos of herself in a vain attempt to disguise just how big and blubbery she actually was. Her corpulent caboose, tree trunk like thighs and blubbery belly would certainly end up being quite the surprise to some people and probably cause her to face lots of painful and humiliating rejection.
“Good,” thought Asami. People like that, vain fit women, deserved to be humbled and learn what it’s like to be made fun of for being bigger, to experience what Asami had experienced for so much of her life.
Asami craved more justice, and she soon found it.
There was a redhead sitting lying in a beach chair on one of the campus lawns in just a bikini and clearly trying to attract the attention of passersby as she worked on tanning her gorgeous slim and toned figure. This would have been bad enough, and made her worthy of judgment in Asami’s eyes, but then Asami watched the fit redhead lower her sunglasses to sneer at some chubby chicks that were walking by, and that judgmental sneer on her face made it clear to Asami that it was time for the redhead to be far more robust.
Pounds were about to pile on.
With the help of the notebook, Asami turned the sunbathing beauty into a beached whale. The redhead grew round with fat very quickly. Her trim waist exploded with huge love handles, and her body grew so rapidly wide with fat that her blubber soon had her wedged in her beach chair. She grew a belly so big and blubbery that it sagged and spilled down onto her fat lap even while she was mostly reclined. Her ass grew extra fat as well and was covered with cellulite. It would have lifted her out of the chair quite a bit, but the width of it instead contributed to getting her stuck in it instead. The redhead’s thighs grew nice and thick and covered with cellulite as well. They pressed together and pushed each other as far out as the chair would allow. Her thunder thighs gave her a gloriously fat lap which her belly continued to roll across as she grew larger and larger.
Eventually, the chair could take no more, and the legs gave way. This caused her obese body to crash to the grass with a thud that sent all of her fat quivering, at least the fat that wasn’t duly pinned to the arms of the chair which were still holding strong to her sides though the were decidedly bent. Her own flabby arms flapped uselessly as she tried to get her fat body up but was instead stuck to the ground like a turned over turtle.
Presumably some good samaritan would come along and help her up already, but until then the redhead was stuck rocking back and forth in her karmic humiliation, fat body undulating as she tried and failed to get her fat body up under her own power.
Asami found it quite amusing.
The next two people that Asami judged to be vain and worthy of fattening were a pair of ladies on roller skates. Their crime? They had the gall to flaunt their athletic bodies in nothing more than booty shorts and sports bras as they glided across campus.
Asami made sure that their gliding was a lot slower and more awkward by giving them big bloated bellies that sloshed about as they skated. Their sagging guts were paired with bloated butts that served as weighty anchors, spilling out of their shorts and slowing them down considerably. But what really slowed them down the most wasn’t their blubber butts. It was their new thunder thighs.
It’s really hard to waddle while on skates, but these two formerly lithe babes were managing to do just that as their thick thighs rubbed together and greatly hindered their movement. Their fat flesh was fully on display as their outfits did not change, and so their fat flabby bodies were seen by all. Nothing was hidden. Their fat flab flapped about in the breeze as they wheezed and wheeled about fighting not to fall down and humiliate themselves further.
The two women who once attracted admiring gazes now drew scornful looks and snickers as they rolled by. Sometimes, the kinder people would whisper things like “Well at least they’re being active,” but that was currently the best they could hope for, and Asami found that most amusing.
Of course, those who had the nastiest words to share soon found their own formerly slim waistlines significantly softened. One particularly bitchy brunette who commented on how the fattened roller skaters looked pregnant found herself with an enormous food baby, a brand new pot belly that stretched her shirt out significantly and would embarrassingly draw lots of comments and plenty of hands looking to rub her “pregnant” belly only to humiliate her with the realization that it was all just fat, rich, buttery belly fat.
A pair of catty women found themselves with noticeably bloated blubber butts and pants that would no longer button along with appetites to ensure their future obesity. And Asami even took a person who was rattling off joke after joke and made it so that every joke she made at another person’s expense would add pounds to herself as punishment. She was certain to be waddling in no time, not that Asami had the time to find out. She had a softball game to attend to and far more people to transform.
And while Asami enjoyed giving trim women tubby bellies, she never quite found that to be enough and was looking to be a bit more expansive.
For her next real bit of fun, Asami decided to be a bit more benevolent. Asami overheard what was clearly a sorority sister making fun of a would-be pledge for her lack of curves. The specific phrase “member of the itty-bitty titty committee” was thrown around, and that was the straw the broke the camel’s back (a back that was growing more and more fragile these days), and Asami, in her never ending quest for justice decided that she would help the poor pledge out.
She made the mousy woman decidedly chubby. After all, she was not in the business of keeping people slim. However, she did use the notebook to gift this woman with outrageous curves and turned her into a bombshell with big breasts, an even bigger butt, and just enough of a belly to keep her a little self-conscious and keep her vanity in check. Her breasts were made incredibly large, far larger than the breasts of the woman who had been making fun of her and could now only stare her the formerly flat woman’s mighty bosom with extreme jealousy.
The woman’s new bigger breasts burst the top button of her polo shirt and pushed outward providing a view of some very tantalizing cleavage. The woman’s once narrow hips widened and stretched her jeans to their limit, and her bigger butt threatened to cause them to burst. She also grew a cute little pot belly with some matching love handles. The pairing of these things cause her polo shirt to ride up and reveal a delightful muffin top.
The woman who was her bully was not nearly as lucky.
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