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"President Piggy" - An Exclusive Cut

🕑 Added 2024-08-14 15:32:32 +0000 UTC

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BS Writer

That's very fair. The thing is, dream sequences are just super easy to write, and once I've got it, it's not like I'm going to not use it. I'll often go to a transformation sequence when I'm writing something and get jammed up. So this piece was giving me a lot of writer's block because I had already written so much other stuff, and this was becoming intimidating. Doing the dream sequence really helped get my creativity flowing and led to the rest of the piece. The ending is more reflective of several things: 1. I wanted to get the piece done today and it was already far longer than any of the other stories in the collection 2. Because I know that this story has a good chance of being the one picked to be released and then get an expanded exclusive cut, I felt comfortable wrapping this up in a way knowing it would give me something to come back to and also something that I can use as a draw should I end up doing an extended cut exclusively for here and release the original on Deviant Art.

Searcher

I like the world building but I have to agree with the patron above. While you're very good at dream sequences I personally would have preferred you have cut out all that dream stuff so that it could have more story with the actual Revenge. Keep up the good work though. You're very consistent I appreciate it.

BS Writer

Did I mention Megan's family because I knew it would set up easy scenes for an extended cut? Yes. Did I also mention a subplot with Jocelyn so that if this got voted for an extended cut I would also have another short exclusive cut story that I could attach to it? Also yes.

Maxarator

Definitely need to hear more about what happened over break with Jocelyn and Meghans sisters! Good story, Meghan got what she gave

BS Writer

Thank you for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate that you took the time to comment. I totally understand the desire for more. Luckily, once all the stories are done there will be a vote for which exclusive stories get extended cuts, and I think this one is the likely favorite to win. If this does get the extended cut treatment, all of that stuff will definitely be in there and more.

Kajetan Larysz

Hey, this is one of the best stories I've read but at the end I miss more details. You know, a described party where Megan was dressed as a pig, more dialogues, and definitely more ridicule from other girls from PHAT especially Daphne and Audrey. If it was like that it would be the best story I've read in history. best regards Kajetan


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