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"The Scales of Time" Epilogue 1

🕑 Added 2024-08-25 15:30:02 +0000 UTC

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BS Writer

Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you stick around for more of my stuff!

Clayton Osmar

I’ve loved this series. Had to join the Patreon so I could finish it.

BS Writer

Thank you. I'm going to go edit that now.

Wilbo

Great to see this story continue. Julie seems to have let her new position and power go to her head. I'm rooting for a happy ending for her, where she realizes the path she's going down without having too bad of a downfall. Also the tie-in to the costume store is great. Getting some backstory for Mathilde was nice. The costume shop stories and this series are my two favorite set of stories by you, so seeing them crossover was nice. One bit of constructive criticism, it seems like you interchange Reyna and Darla's names a few times in this chapter. You have Madison say hi to Reyna and mention Darla being sent away. But then Darla is the one following Julie around.


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