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New Cover for Book 6

🕑 Added 2022-03-19 09:08:53 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Thank you! Regarding the cats...I'm not sure yet how I want to approach this aspect. We shall see. Thanks!

A. F. Kay

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish I could have made this even more apparent. It bums me out. Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!

A. F. Kay

Yeah, it might be too good in that it looks off or bad. I might need to revisit this.

A. F. Kay

Thank you very much. I explained up top a bit, but this might just be a mistake on my part.

A. F. Kay

Thank you!!!

A. F. Kay

Thank you Matthew! The figure is in very untraditional type armor and its awkwardness is an extension of that. He is also very injured. I think though, that while this is true to the scene, I probably shouldn't have reflected it like that on the cover. We will see.

A. F. Kay

Thank you! The color is my fault as I'm trying to give each book a major one and I picked grey/black for this one. He is also very injured but it might have been a mistake to display him like that on the cover.

A. F. Kay

Thank you!!! I appreciate that.

A. F. Kay

Thank you so much. I like it sooooo much better than the first one.

A. F. Kay

Thank you!!!

A. F. Kay

Thanks! I was talking more about the untraditional makeup of the armor itself. I think it might have been too subtle to see.

A. F. Kay

I think so too. Thanks for letting me know.

A. F. Kay

That makes me very glad!

A. F. Kay

I appreciate that!

A. F. Kay

Thank you!

Eric

This one is much better. Do the cat status symbolize anything?

Galactic_Hermit_

Could be the “scarecrow look” that’s the feeling I got

Carl Mason

Your artist pulled off the "injured" look very well. The character looks about to faint.

Daemon Shade

I like the concept for the character, and the cover overall is amazing. The proportions just seem a little off from the bottom of the ribs to the knees.

A. F. Kay

Thank you so much for all the feedback. For those of you who don't care for the figure...I was afraid of this reaction to the figure. I tried doing something and I think I just made things worse. He is wearing a type of armor that is very hard to display and is not common at all. In addition, ********SMALL SPOILER******** He is very injured as well.

Elliot Taylor

I agree with Mathew and joe in that the character looks oddly shaped but otherwise I think it’s a great cover

Michael Stephens

I believe you nailed it this time

Matthew Dodwell

Agree with Joe here. Love the arch and dragon! Really good For me, the figure is standing one hip higher than the other, the hand on the staff is bent back and the leggings look odd. Overall figure looks unbalanced, not like a master martial artist in tune with their body... Noted what you said in this week's roundup so I might be missing something there and look forward to seeing the figure from your viewpoint

Joe

I like this dragon better, I like the building better too. I like the person less (this person gives off the feeling of weakness - I think it's his stance), and I think it could use more color.