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Divine Apostasy Book 6 - Chapter 78

🕑 Added 2022-04-16 05:16:27 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

I need to adjust Sift's dialogue a little. I am trying to walk a thin line and I think I slipped off a bit. Thanks for the feedback!

Daemon Shade

I feel like things are well set for Sift to have a short serious conversation with Lylan, and then a slightly longer one at the end with Ruwen, about how he's not as dumb as he comes off. I've always considered Sift to be the type of friend who can do what's needed to help the others. Whether that's playing a fool or distracting a temple... ;)

A. F. Kay

Thank you!!!

A. F. Kay

I love their relationship too. I need to take a look at it from JJs point of view and make sure I'm not overdoing it. But it is just so fun to write. Glad you like it! Thanks for the feedback!!!

A. F. Kay

Yikes! This is definitely not what I want. I might need to tone that down. Thank you for the feedback!

Lena M. Lucente

That's what I love about sift. Ruwen and Shifts chemistry is the best. I never tired of it. Every Saturday morning I get these chapters, thanking you for writing them and then desperately wanting more.

jj

Is it just me or has Sift become completely insufferable? It's been happening for some time now but the incessant one-liners and quips are making me detest his character. Dude doesn't ever have a normal conversation without a quip.