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Divine Apostasy Book 6 - Chapter 87

🕑 Added 2022-05-14 06:38:57 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Excellent point!!!!! I need to clean up the verbiage to make it clear and consistent! Thank you!!!!!

A. F. Kay

Thank you!

BRB

—— “Did not stop. Shifted to past,” the creature said. Ruwen leaned back, shocked at the power of such an ability. He had wondered how the shield had stopped even his gravity waves. It made much more sense that it hadn’t stopped them, but shuffled the damage to another time. —— Not a big deal, but this seems imprecise to me, and Ruwen tends to be precise. The barrier does stop *some* things from going through it, like Ruwen’s body and the steam he created. I can’t remember if the fireballs he shot off bounced around or disappeared through the barrier, but now I’m curious.

Nick O'Roonling

Power gained to(o) quickly

A. F. Kay

Without context this is confusing. I will just say by the end of the series I hope it makes sense.

A. F. Kay

Thank you so much!!!!

A. F. Kay

Thank you!!!!!!

Rodney Carter

I'm a bit confused by the altering the course of an arrow line. It seems like an obvious warning about how the temporal shifters work, but Ruwen's analysis of Blapy's clues makes it seem like something deeper.

Joe

he would err/or/ on the side of violence.

Joe

He would offer the Plague Sire/n/ and the army a choice


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