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Divine Apostasy Book 6 - Chapter 94

🕑 Added 2022-05-28 05:13:53 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

I will look at that. Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

A. F. Kay

I will revisit this a little in the third draft. But without saying too much, yes, that is what I am going for. This obviously has drawbacks and Ruwen will need to grow and evolve as the series continues.

A. F. Kay

Thank you sooooo much!!!!

A. F. Kay

Thank you!!!!!!

brennon Petersen

When Ruwen attacked the last two aspects you have "as they collapsed the ground" instead collapsed to the ground might be more appropriate depending on what you were looking for their. Also that you so much for the chapter I expecially loved how Ruwen monologued before the end about how much of a mistake that they made trying to face him. 😁

Gaurav Hosur

What’s the logic for leaving the aspects around? Something like mercy for those weaker?

Jeremiah Halstead

You have a Draught that should be Drought there

Samuel Strode

Poison with two feet to abdomen. To his abdomen


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