A. F. Kay
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November 13, 2021 - Update
🕑 Added 2021-11-13 10:22:03 +0000 UTCHello!
I'll start by saying this week has been one of the hardest for me writing-wise in a long time. A small part is due to travel and being out of my routine, but a larger part has to do with something terrible: math.
I am trying to figure out the best way to balance the training sequences that I love, with progression, and now, math. It combined to create a massive case of writer's block. Ugh, this week really sucked.
The good news is I got through it. I'm not thrilled with the chapters. I'm scared I over-explained. There are a couple of critical pieces necessary for the book as a whole but I'm not convinced I did the best job conveying it. I'll be interested in your comments. Did I mention math? Hours and hours of math. *shakes fist at the sky
Okay, enough complaining. On the bright side, I also worked out a critical detail on how the ending sequence will work in this book (thanks, Jason!).
I hope you had a good week and it involved very little math.
I opened up chapters 6 and 7 to Root.
I opened up chapters 8, 9, and 10 to Harvester.
I added chapters 11, 12, and 13 to Step Master, Blapy's Favorite, and Divine.
Enjoy!
This week was another prime example of why I need you. These chapters, even if they aren't perfect, only exist because you are here. I can guarantee you I would have finished Dune instead of writing if that weren't the case. Thank you so much for being here for me.
Take care,
AFK
Comments
A. F. Kay
You are welcome!
A. F. Kay
Thank you so much for the feedback. I really appreciate it!
Jachin Nelson
Thank you for the chapter
Robert Gunnlaugsson
I think the fact that you must move mathematical concepts into an explanation without overwhelming your audience is a big factor for why you’re not loving the process. I’m up to chapter ten and so far, you’re doing a good job. I’m not bored or confused with what you’re saying. For what it’s worth, good job!
