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Divine Apostasy Book 6 - Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2021-11-20 08:50:21 +0000 UTC

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A. F. Kay

Thank you so much, everyone! This portion is nearing an end, and I appreciate the positive feedback.

Joe

In my opinion, it feels great do far - I don't feel like we are spending too much time here, at least not at this point. Especially when you consider what else Ruwen has to be ready for before he returns home. Although if this was all he did in a book, then I would feel disappointed. I would want to see how it plays out a bit when he returns home. But so far, it is awesome. Fridays have become my favorite days of the week because of these installments. You are doing GREAT.

Daemon Shade

The trouble with trying to balance an entry to a series is that so much is already established as far as characters, pacing, style, etc. I personally enjoy the deviation, but I'd be happy to help bounce some options around at some point.

A. F. Kay

Thank you! I am getting concerned we are spending too much time here. So I'm sensitive to your comment. I still want to touch on the creation and time roles so we still aren't done. I'm trying to make sure we feel Ruwen's progression to make all this world-building satisfying. Please let me know if I don't get the balance right. Thanks for the feedback!

A. F. Kay

Yes, we need to get to that as well as the time ones. Thanks for the feedback!

A. F. Kay

So many building blocks. I feel the pressure to speed things up a bit. Thanks!

Daemon Shade

Ugh, it's disgusting how well you cliffhang. I can't wait to see how this goes, and I'm loving all the technical details being covered so far. It's a slow start, and a huge step to the side storywise, but I'm 100% here for it. Keep it up!