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Book Six Cover Poll

🕑 Added 2022-01-20 17:03:55 +0000 UTC

Comments

Eric

Is that a flying squarel dragon? it looks awesome but the dragons anatomy is a little off.

A. F. Kay

Thank you everyone for the feedback. I think I'll ask them to reposition the sun, make Ruwen a little more defined, and maybe lessen the brightness of the sun a bit. I sense the cohesiveness issue a little as well. I'm not sure how to fix that though.

Michael Stephens

This cover seems too serious to do this, but it would be cool if you could have a cute centipede crawling up the A of your name in a future book. You can't go wrong with more centipede.

Michael Stephens

I am not a huge fan. I feel like there is too much transparency layers happening. For some reason, I feel strongly that the sun should not go straight through the building. It should be up higher. It took way too long for me to notice the building in the background. Also is that mist or are we on a cloud? I feel like we are on a cloud since you can't see any ground. If that is what you wanted then that is fine

Bob of Doom

I like it but it doesn't feel cohesive. It feels more like 3 photos overlapping each other with clouds to hide stuff

Joe

Yeah - I think it's OK. I am not too moved by it, but that is probably because it doesn't connect with anything I know of the story so far. But yeah - I think Ruwen should be a little bit more defined. Apart from that, it would seem it's all about the dragon. I think it'll give me something to connect with more. I'm not connecting with the dragon too much.

Carl Mason

It appears to be a wyvern, yeah.

RedThyra

Is the dragon supposed to have arms? It looks like a giant bat at the moment

Daryl Piffre

Sixth rune hype, I hope he gets to go back to rainbows end :)

Nick O'Roonling

For me, the lens flare is too strong - I feel there are too many of the small artefacts it creates. It's a bit of a "JJ Abrams Star Trek 2009" vibe. Also, not sure if this is intentional but is that bright spot their sun in the distance or a plasma blast being shot out of the dragon/wyrm's mouth? If it's a sun, maybe slightly reposition it?

Andrea Vyas

I LOVE this cover. Literally said “holy hell” out loud when I saw it. It is very striking!

MillionLittleE

Well personally the cover does little for me, maybe once the scene plays out I would have a better idea of how I feel.

Spencer Cannan

I feel like the dragon is to much the focus.

Cam

Hmmm. The dragon (blappy?) definitely takes center stage. But ruwen is the second thing I saw. It looks like the watermark is over him and I feel like I have to squint to see him because of the sun. But I feel like that adds to him being so godlike here. Like he’s not quite human anymore? Maybe I’m overthinking it though.

A. F. Kay

I wondered about Ruwen being too undefined. This comes from a scene toward the end of the book and the cover people did what I told them. I'm wondering if he should look a little more defined though.